|Reviews for Mahou Hitman Tsunayoshi|
| Windraider 9/4/10 . chapter 4
Hey there, it's good to see u back.
By one thing you should know, it's best not to turn Tsuna into a ladies man where he hits on the girls like Negi.
Sure turning him into a ladies man is okay, but not by choice, but rather by being himself, not because he's sappy like in this chapter against Setsuna.
| 13animenurd13 9/2/10 . chapter 4
LOL xD I LIKED THE OMAKE, AND I LIKED IT WHERE THERE LIIKE ACHOO! AND RYOHEIS LIKE EXTREME! LOL XD XDXD MORE MORE MORE! PLEASE UPDATE THIS ASAP OR ILL SICK MY VERY HAPPY DEADLY DANGEROUS VERY HUNGRY EVIL KAWAI TUBBY(CAT) O HELL ON U! SICK UM KITTTY!
| OBSERVER01 8/7/10 . chapter 3
| Shiratori Ryuga 8/5/10 . chapter 3
Hrm... not a bad story, needs a little polishing but not bad. I like the way you use the Hayate style humor in breaking the 4th wall, but you might want to tone that down a bit.
As for pairing... I'll vote for Mana with Tsuna. The mercenary and the mafia boss pairing should be fun.
| 13animenurd13 8/3/10 . chapter 3
LOL XD! I LOVE HOW HES LIKE IS IT A CHIBI VAMPIRE AND A ROBOT? O.O HOW DID U KNOW? EEEH? SERIOUSLY? R U AN ESPER?LOL XD MORE MORE MORE MORE! PLEASE UPDATE THIS ASAP OR ILL SICK MY VERY HUNGRY EVIL KAWAI TUBBY(CAT) O HELL ON U! SICK UM KITTY!
| 13animenurd13 8/3/10 . chapter 2
LOL XD WAIT FOR IT... AND... KYA! LOL XD
| Some random person 8/1/10 . chapter 3
Why don't you make Tsuna 18 years old? If I remember correctly there's an episode in the anime where in the future arc he have a dream of having his birthday and it's the 15th
| TakeshiYamamoto2980 7/31/10 . chapter 3
Love this chapter to the EXTREME! and I'm sorry because I forgot to vote last time... my vote is of course Konoka... they look so great together... haha XD... can't wait for the next chapter... please cotninue...
| legendarygamer 7/31/10 . chapter 3
i feel your pain about the school and exams. homework could be used for torture for terrorists that would break them for sure. dont get discouraged by the few reviews, Rome wasnt built in a day, same idea for netfanfiction story. you should be careful about add characters from anime and games because negima characters itself is huge listup and can be easy to lose track of them. one of my fav villians would be sephiroth.
i vote for chao lingsten cause she is very rare to use in pairings and is quite interesting to see how she try to discover how dying will flames work by watching/intereacting tsuna. another vote is Koyomi fate's minion since she never has been used in any pairing ever as far i know and her artcraft and anti pervert reaction is cute and funny to see. and tsuna talking could cause her to change sides, never happened in any story either! maybe you could have one of the guardians unexpectly come during the scene kyoto arc where the demon god is and it dies by the guardian's hand and evangeline get mad about stealing her thunder, maybe hibaki or muruko and chrome.
| ShadowMasterIZ 7/31/10 . chapter 3
You're doing it again noone knows konoka is a fortune teller until after the kyoto arc nor did thet include the fact that she was an heiress until then either
| Ignisha 7/31/10 . chapter 3
People have to make more reborn and negima stories... it makes such a good crossover...
anyway, nice chapter, and although eva-chan was a little ooc, it wasn't bad. i can't wait for the next chapter!
| TimeLordLady 7/23/10 . chapter 2
UPDATE SOON! I'm loving where this story is going. I can't wait to read more.
| OBSERVER01 7/20/10 . chapter 2
pretty the harem i vote for setsuna(where konoka goes she goes,theyre a matching pair,)kaede,shesone of the kindest characters in negima,the way she treats kotaro is proof of that)mana,she is badass,nuff it up
| legendarygamer 7/17/10 . chapter 2
strange i recall chuck norris but for some reason itachi and kisame are in your house and not responding to my calls by per chance you have pockey there? cause itachi tend to get high if he eat them and i dont knows about kisame but dont ever eat fish around him since he would go on a murderiously rampage and hide any movies like jaws since kisame like the shark eating people but get very emotional when the shark dies.
as for pairing of five people or more, i think chizuru since her personaly is similiar to kyoko and uni not to mention is very brave. evangeline would be a bad idea since her personality is like muruko's. not to mention would scares tsuna. chachamaru would be cute and interesting based on her reactions. asuna is a possiblity since the negima hints that negi could be related to asuna not that i would mind. Chao lingsten would be quite witty and would be funny how the mad scientist that sell her soul to science intereacts with tsuna. setsuna could be in the pairing to make death threats to tsuna or glares to not touch konoka or he would lose a very important body part and is quite cute when she blushed. ako izumi have very low opinion of herself and tsuna could boost this up with his and secrectly reborn's dying will bullet. kaede and mana's personality are tricky to pin down but both have a fiece rivality and would attempt to defeat the other in any contest. chisame would wish she never meet tsuna since his life is exactly what she get insane about which would be funny to watch. are you planning to sent lambo to shake mahaora academy up or reborn? this is just my opinions. you are the boss of your story.
| Ignisha 7/16/10 . chapter 2
Oh yeah, and about the guy who's talking to Tsuna using the bolded thingie, that's Giotto right? If you're confused, Giotto is Primo's name.
Eh, nice chapter too.