 Dark Knight Gafgar 9/19/08 . chapter 1Rick Astley plays. Skuld's head explodes. |
 brindani 11/21/06 . chapter 1The idea has a lot of merit and though I can't think of anything, I'm sure there exists a slight twist that would allow for more humor, otherwise the change is just overtly dramatic making it unlikely that the heavens wouldn't send her down on assignment as being too dangerous. Then again, its just a spoof.
Good work,
brindani |
 Wright805 8/8/06 . chapter 1 Very funny story. You're a good writer.
Just one thing. I'm pretty sure that the reason Mara and Urd are affected by music is that Mara's a demon and Urd is a half-demon. That is, being affected by music is a demonic trait, not a Goddess trait. Nothing would happen to Belldandy or Skuld.
Good story though. |
 Innortal 6/17/06 . chapter 1LOL, perfect! |
 YetAnotherCatgirl 7/8/05 . chapter 1 This story was interesting and well crafted, but not on a par with others you have written. I think it was because of the OOCness of Belldandy. The dramatic shift in her actions with music didn't match the shift in others' actions: from sweet to serial killer is a much bigger jump than to sleeping, or dancing.
And why wouldn't someone run into the other room and turn off the 80's music, so they would only have to deal with 3 minutes of a psycho Belldandy? Urd just shows off the empty case, and if she could get the case, why couldn't she get to the stereo?
I liked everyone else's reactions, though. It was like watching a real episode. Of course they would leave Keiichi to deal with Belldandy, and of course Skuld would build another invention.
My favorite part was when Keiichi starts spouting his speech about staying by her side, etc., and she still hacks at him with the chainsaw. It was funny that the usual speech didn't snap her out of it. |
 CTHKSI 6/8/05 . chapter 1 XD That was great! |
 dogbertcarroll 8/22/03 . chapter 1Skuld didn't bother to look up from the device she was working on as she said,
"It was three years ago, while I was in the middle of 'Think of Me,' from
Phantom of the Opera, that I created a miniature radio that would play Broadway
hits twenty-four hours a day and implanted it in my skull."
LOL. Great concept.
"It turns her into a homicidal maniac," Urd stated as she cringed.
What were you smoking when you wrote this?
*grin* |
 Hokata Yuy 1/25/03 . chapter 1What about Peorth?
would she start auctioning off anything she can lay her hands on if she hears Gospel?
... what? it's just a thought... |
 Lone Wolf NEO 7/15/02 . chapter 1damn good! |
 TA Maxwell 3/24/02 . chapter 1Oh my goddess this was funni! Imagining Bell as a homocidal maniac. It coulda been better if Bell didn't know what she was doing, but it's still funni! A skuld's lil invention radio thingy was...unique. all around thumbs up! |
 OMG fan no. 1 3/18/02 . chapter 1 This is way funny! here's a pic of my face when I finished reading it: :) |
 Skyrocket 2/25/02 . chapter 1I can see some music from the 80's doing that to people. But I think stuff like Tiffany, Night Ranger, Nu Shooz, Mister Mister and Color Me Badd is more likely to turn people into maniacs. |
 short.essay 2/23/02 . chapter 1"I hate my life!" -Keiichi
LOL! I think the neighborhood heard me, that was so hilarious! ::wipes tears next to eyes:: That was great! |
 Dan Inverse 2/20/02 . chapter 1Wow Bell a what? This is great I wodner if you could create another part for this story? I don't know Maybe you could place Bell chasing Mara around with a chainsaw? |
 Dezz 2/20/02 . chapter 1When I first read this on the FFML, I honestly didn't know what to make of it. To tell you the truth, I still don't know what to think. I liked the little twist that you put on it about the music, but chainsaws? It was well-written, I'll have to give you that. ;) |