Your portrayal of Marcus' helplessness was very unsettling, his fear & concern for Oliver just echoes right through the whole fic.

As someone who used to suffer from sleepwalking herself, you explained it really well! Being able to see people but not actually SEEING them so this is brilliant on that front. I also found it really sweet with Marcus taking care of him! I usually don't go for these types of stories because I'm a rude git going for the naughty ones but this was fabulous!

Awwww! Marcus is just so cute!

I like how he tries his best to take care of Olivier!

aw...that was cute!