Awwww... I love Elin and Melica! They're so cool! And I love the idea of the planet of women, though I'm not entirely sure what the keremon is (for all that I think I have an idea). Amazing job! Are you sure that Elin and Melica aren't Force-talented? *grin*

nicely written! You weave the story well.

I loved this! Are you going to do a sequel?