I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Very nice and I like it. Please update soon

WoW like WOOOOOOWWWW I love this keep updating but quicker!

my throat is dry my eyes are becoming dam but not yet over flowing...god this is such a heart jerking story. Keep it up, maybe a scene switch showing the real members of the team or a memory of them coming back and Koenma pale and white looking to see Hiei. Something like the others walking to the shrine and seeing the little girl run up to Botan calling her aunty and the woman explains this is their teammates daughter that he never knew about since the mission took him away.

They all collaps and look at the girl who now won't know either of her parents if Hiei doesn't succed in his success on getting kagome back. then maybe she will look at the tree alot and kurama asks what she is looking for and she says the painted man describing him to the others horror or hope.

just an idea

Oh she wsas pregnent SNAP! How is it possible for the others to not find out she was pregnent? Did they decide to keep it a secret form him? Yukina is a Aunt and Keiko should notice if not Botan when checking up on her.

When she ided and Hei charged after her soul did the others finf out about Hikari?

Will SOuta climb the Genkai steps with Hikari to open the door and place her down infornt of everyone to introduce her to her parents friends and her Aunt Yukina her father's sister? That would be good especially if she mentions the painted man again and the promise he made to come back with mommy.

Koenma would be sad a true todler before him wants to see her daddy and mommy and he can't do anything.

I saw the trailer on youtube and had to check it out sound good great job!

WOW! This story is evolving so well! I'm getting more and more impressed as the chapters go on! Please keep up the amazing work! Ja ne!

Forbidden-Chan

Wow... what an interesting story! i sure hope he gets 2 her in time! thanks a bunch for writin this! i cant wait for more!

Awwwh! so sad... AND I LOVE ITT! can't wait for the naext chappper!

loved this chapter xD

oh really! thats cool, i know some japanese xD

me half asian xD

i was crying! xDD im so emotional some times. I LOVE ITT!

I loved it :'( So sad xD what language r u studying? :O

Gah! found the preview for this on youtube! Finish soon? I love this story so far but GAH! so many questions to be answered! for some strange reason I keep thinking that the ferryman is the real hiei and she was with him the whole time and just had to put two and tow together! don't really think thats true but that would be interesting! Please update soon?

GEEEEEEH! i love it!

lov it update soon pease