Oh wow a really good Deadly Premonition fanfiction I can't wait for the next updat-*sees last time you updated*...awww

Words cannot describe how much I love this story so far... I know it's been a long time since you updated it, but I think I'll hold out hope that you'll come back to it one day, because it is the kind of story that makes me happy inside.

these interactions that you've written between jim and york give me chills. you're really adding depth to these characters, and it's fantastic.

thank you for writing this.

how i wish you can update soon...

I hope you haven't abandoned this story it's really great :(

Very excellent story and well written _

I've just caught up with the story and I have to say that you're doing an amazing job with it. Honestly, at first I was a little apprehensive, considering the unique nature of the source material. But as I read on, I began to appreciate how you expand upon the original story, flesh out certain tidbits and tackle the more gamey segments. It gives the story more oomph, since it never was about the murders, but about York/Zach and Greenvale. Oh, and I really like it that you don't stick to York's perspective all the time, since it allows you to show the behind-the-scenes of Greenvale.

Lest I forget, I also like how you're making the investigation more of an investigation, as it makes the whole thing less... random, and gives York more chances to shine, for example the part with Jim Green when York comes to visit him.

In short, 10/10 - do continue!

I do look forward to your next update. As I am sure others are as well. :)

This is probably one of the better novelizations I've read, and it's about one of my favourite games too, so bonus points, mate!

Zach, you're going to have to keep me in check till the next update!

Love this chapter especially the end. Were you going for the Spiderman reference? Keep up this wonderful story, and I look forward to the end.

Another fun chapter. I especially enjoyed the conversation between Emily and Becky and I will enjoy seeing the next part of the story.

Another interesting chapter. I can't wait to see where we go from here.

I get so excited when you update. I do a little fist pump dance and everything. Probably because this story is so fantastic and well written. It's been a while since I read a fanfiction as lovely as this one is :D

Animagess lighting up my afternoon again!

A new chapter what a lovely birthday present :)