I'm not afraid to say that I cried reading this. Wow just wow incredible job.

I freaking loved this story, especially the way you made Edward break. I mean, honestly, I really don't like angst and it makes me super depressed, but with this story, I could really feel how torn up Edward is. Oh yeah, towards the end, I think you wrote "bed" instead of "beg", which kind of threw off the whole conclusion because then I started thinking about some perverted stuff... ." Yeah, but I really adored this story and it broke my heart (which, now that I think about it, is kind of really sad)... Please keep writing more stories like this! (Maybe I'm a masochist?)

Well now I'm all depressed and teary-eyed and my nose is running. There's a reason I usually stick to fluff dammit.

This was very well written though.

woooooooooo that's really sad, you know, i always wanted someone to feel edward's pain, to understand it. i just feel that many always think about bella's pain, how she turned into a zombie when edward left her in new moon but they are all ignoring what edward has been through

i guess this is what edward may have felt if bella chose jacob in eclipse.

sometimes, i think that if vampires can cry it would have been great. i have always wanted a bestfriend for edward, to feel his pain, to advice him, to hug him when he needs it

sorry i am talking too much, i just really like how you described the pain, edward's pain

This was so sad. I really feel for Edward. The way that you described his emotions and how he was suffering without Jacob was amazing. Excellent one shot.