uhhh... i haven't really read off*beat, (im stupid. dont hurt me), but i felt like clicking on this cause i got here through random clicking and feel like i should write a review anyway. well, your charecters were understanable. Not much else for me to say here. toodles.

Eh, it was OK. A few typos, but whatever.

Interesting angle... never thought of Tory being the army type!