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| Reviews for Alphonse and Edward in the Labyrinth |
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   Mrs-Doitsu 12/7/12 . chapter 1Update plz! |
| nightshadow23 8/11/12 . chapter 6 Great chapter but is al gonna use any alchemy in this? Just a suggestion. ;) |
| nightshadow23 8/11/12 . chapter 5 Oh, shaddup jareth! Youre a pedophile and you know it! Brilliant chapter! |
| nightshadow23 8/11/12 . chapter 4 Yaaay! Spakle party! Its edward cullen- i mean Jareth! |
| nightshadow23 8/11/12 . chapter 3 I tried to wish away my sister once! ...it didnt work... great chapter! |
| nightshadow23 8/11/12 . chapter 2 Poor al! (In eds defense, if i cought al reading twilight, id tease him too) |
| nightshadow23 8/10/12 . chapter 1 Secret ninja mettings! AHAHAHAHAHA! FEAR MIDGET NINJAS! FEAR US! |
| freakyfriday13 10/19/11 . chapter 6 Alphonse saw Hoggle pee...and Hoggle's OK with that? Haha! Love this story, hope you update soon! |
| the.stories.live.on 10/3/11 . chapter 6 Oh man, this idea is so weird, but I can't wait to see Ed give Jareth hell. That would be so much fun! |
| Gothic-Romantic99 8/19/11 . chapter 6 Nice chapter. Aww, Al is just as polite, modest, and sweet as ever. On the other hand Hoggle is being rather rude to him. Good work with this chapter, I'm excited to see where you take it next. |
| wishfulliving89 7/15/11 . chapter 6 love the story so far. so cant wait for the next chapter. |
| Gothic-Romantic99 4/25/11 . chapter 5 This story is awesome. I love Labyrinth and Fullmetal Alchemist, but never thought that the two could be put together so well. The plot is well thought out. It's quite believeable that after being insulted Al said a few things he didn't mean only to find out the whole be-careful-what-you-wish-for thing came to be. So now Al has to go on a quest to rescue his brother. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I can't wait to see how the interactions between Ed and Jareth will go. Jareth doesn't know what he's gotten himself into by taking the fullmetal brat. Ed is certain to make things difficult for the goblin king. For some reason I feel that by the end of the story Jareth will be begging for Al to take Ed back. Good work. Update soon. |
| wishfulliving89 4/6/11 . chapter 5 ha ha. so cant wait for the next chapter. very funny. love it 2. |
| The Silverhand Alchemist 4/5/11 . chapter 5 I'm a Jareth fan, but I guess you could call him a pedophile, seeing that a 3000 year old goblin king fell in love with a 16 year old girl. My friend, Michael pointed that out. . . Anyway, update soon, I'm getting into it. I've watched the Labyrinth 12 times! |
| wishfulliving89 4/5/11 . chapter 4 ha ha, love it. very funny an cute 2. so cant wait for the next chapter. |
