I really loved this story,very sweet,funny & shows a little of their playful friendship while showing how they feel for eachother respectively.I loved the parents betting on the outcome and

the cute backstory of Ethan & Lyra playing,this was definitely my type of a romance story.

Very good, but sorted cliche in some way. But it's a good story to my taste.

This is really good! A really cute fic, and you captured the personalities of both the characters perfectly! Fantastic work! :)

Aw, it's so cute! :)

Aww! So cute and fluffy!

That was so cute! x3

I loved it viva EthanXLyra. :)

hahahaaha yeaah, Ethan's calls are sometimes really stupid xD but i love when he calls :D anyway, i love the fic *w* it was sooo cuuteee x3 great job*_*

-sighs- i love this couple :D great story, very cool on the metaphors. Wish i could write like that x-x.

and isn't it called HeartGoldShipping?

wait Ethan talks about Marills and baths?

I chose him as my character so Lyra is always calling me to say her Marill smells like a dust mop.

by the way, cute fluff.

actually, Lyra's got some pretty stupid phone calls too XD

if im not mistaken, theyre the same exact ones.

anyway, i liked it :)

SNAPPPPP! J-just Lovely! Lovely!

It always makes my day when I see a good EthanxLyra story, and I'll tell you what: you just made my day. Keep up that good work, you! :D