Ok so it's a bit irritating that Bella is so immature. And i don't mean her age. I think that if you want to write a fic with this big of an age gap then you could at least have made Bella's mind more mature. I guess i just think it's weird for her to be the nanny but all she seems to think of is having sex with Edward. I get

Great job on the story!

This thing has the wrong title, It should have been two grownups who where too stupid to talk to each other, cause it took forever to get to the end and the same thing was done and said over and over, my lord you could actually skip whole sections and not miss a thing. I still gave it hope, I can take no more, that's all folks...

loved this chapter...

oh...I pity edward...

can't blame Bella...

Is there going to be another one ?

U got to do another chapter on the baby brother/ sister

Cool maybe you could add more romance in it now

Well I know this was written quite a while ago, but I just wanted to say I am so enjoying this story. Lovely. You also tugged at my heart strings with your authors note. I don't think there's a woman that hasn't been there. I couldn't listen to the radio for months after a particularly bad break up. I hope your heart troubles are over now.

Now I'm going to go finish reading your sweet story. Thanks for sharing with us!

Great story!

awesome

Ahh such a cute story!

This was such a sweet story. I am glad it was

recommended to me.

So sweet.