i was laughing my ass off while i read your story its hilarius.

and yes i know my spelling sucks.

Thats just great. Really like how that guy was practically begging for mercy. Thought that the last chapter was cute also

Nice. Your talented with this although some parts re still A little awkward. But update ASAP

Omg youi have to update this story its so cute and diffrent I love it so much. Please write more soon

Aww such a cute chapter :) update ASAP

Ahhh! You must write more! Your writing is amazing!

sweetpea I love your mind I was laughing so hard at this chapter even though I have already read it... now I just feel like using up all of the characters that are allowed for this review. Momma was telling me a story about a spider while I was reading this and for some reason that made me think about what was happening in the story even more. The ear licking thing reminded me of our night over at 'Akane's' house and the iceing (By the way you guys made it really difficult to focus on my puzzle, you evil monkeys...) Well I still have over nine thousand and four hundred characters left but I have to go open a can of biskets for momma so bye bye lovie and write faster!

This is really funny. You should continue writing it. Preferably soon. Please?

Bout damn time! lol I feel better than the other readers cause I already know whats going to happen :) Write faster lovie

I definitely like your oc and I look forward to seeing what happens next :) I like how you describe Kiyomi cause she seems like a relatable character. Update soon please! And you don't mind, would you check out one of my stories?