I really liked your story and i your style of writing.
And I absolutely LOVED that sentence you also put in the description box, the one with the playground. it's perfect.

This is one of the best Thirteen fanfics I've read. I could realistically see this being something like Tracey's life. Well done.x

That was sublime. You described so much to me in what? A page? Two pages?
About a year ago, I had to give up my wild partying days too. I quit nearly everything, but I do have a cigarette from time to time still, and you described that blast of sensations and memories I get every time I close my eyes and take a drag so well.
Very pleasant little story. Talented writer, you are. Great job.

I loved this. It was so poetic.

Loved it. :) You nailed how Tracy thinks and what she would think about seeing someone else in her same situation.

This is so perfect! Your writing is so lyrical, and the way you structured the story just adds to the poetry. Seriously, fantastic job.

This is so perfect! Your writing is so lyrical, and the way you structured the story just adds to the poetry. Seriously, fantastic job.

Girl, you rock! I loved the way you write. You really are a good writer. It's the best story I've ever read Thirteen. And that ending was fantastic! It's very interesting to see a world of change for Tracy. And then ... All the memories come back when she puts a cigarette between his lips.

I think I'm a little bit in love with this.

Yeah, I like that for a reason too... You write amazingly

3 it! I thought it was well written and just amazing!

I liked it.

Very impressive writing and very, very deep. Even though it's short, the message sticks with you - and trust me when I say that's not easy to accomplish.

I like this. I don't know why. I hope that doesn't sound bad, it's literally, I can't put words to my thoughts. You're a good writer, and I really like your style :D

I really enjoyed this. Nice work. :)