You did a great job conveying the character of the film. Thanks for writing this story.

You captured Stelios' voice and his character. Had the movie shown the men reflecting on their lives as they died, I believe this would have been close to what we'd have seen for him. Well done, my friend, very well done.

I loved this, it was very well written and quite powerful. Please keep writing because this was amazing!

Very nice, very powerful :) I like writing and reading stories like this that deliver a punch near or at the end :) Please keep writing for this fandom! :D

I especially loved this line: "An honor, indeed, to be addressed so by my king" It portrayed so much of his culture without even saying almost anything. :) Amazing writing, please keep it up, this website needs more good writers like you :)

VFK