Yes its short but i really enjoyed it. I love Eve and Frankie and i would love to read more about them.

Hmmmm very interesting...it almost reads like a script because it's chockful of dialogue. I'm not saying that's a bad thing at all actually. However great your dialogue is though, sometimes you need to focus on other aspects of detail and pulling us readers into a more physical world instead of reading what the characters are just talking about. Very true to the characters though and I liked you following along with the story. I would like to see your stories much more descriptive and LONGER so I can enjoy them more. Well done.

Oh shit. this story awesome..

I see minor spelling and grammar errors, and sometimes I get lost in the words, but that could just be my reading owo...

It seems like you're going a little bit too fast.. I don't want to make the judgements on how fast you're going, its your story and as far as I know you could be continuing it on at the end of the movie. it just seems like its too fast because its the 2nd chapter and we're already at the allison/mr bromely reunion part.. this isn't a bad thing, it makes readers curious as to what comes next. And I love the long chapters.

You have excellent storyline following and I really can't wait for the next chapter..

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Really good! I love Daybreakers and I can't wait to read more! Eve sounds like a very promising character! :)

This sounds good so far. I'm looking forward to reading more. Hope you update soon

Send her to the farm.

This story is amazing! I always did love Frankie. XD

Anyways...

Update soon, please! :D

Good chapter. I'm really looking forward to finding out what Bromley's proposition is. Hope you update soon. D

This sounds good so far. I'm looking forward to reading more. Hope you update soon. D

That was awesome! Please keep going. There aren't that many Frankie romance stories on here - only one other really good one - so I'm excited. Keep up the great work, and more soon please! 8D