What a throw-back! Sounded good..

We had so many different ideas back then...

I love seeing you write Ko. And I would defend Seph and say he would never stab him like that, but there was a time when he would've... probably enjoyed it... -_-; those times are behind us now.

Hello! Your sibling was going on about what a good writer you are in a chat room this evening, so I had to come along and read some of your works myself. Little brothers are good for something, eh? Who knew? :)

I'm so glad that for his recommendation of your stories, Luna! You have a rich vocabulary and the imagery in this particular piece is powerful and lingering. A reader truly appreciates it when a writer obviously puts passion into their tale. Bravo.

Interesting...this has my full attention. The language you use to make up the body of this work is very well chosen, and it suits the mood you tried to set here. Nice job! This is some really great work!

Iris