I like it and, if you've ever seen the alternate ending(s) to The Wolfman on BlueRsy, you will see that poor Gwen wasn't long for this world - so it could very well work!

It was great!

I liked it! :)

Nyxia

Excellent poem... Unfortunately, it's also depressing. :). Nice job.

Man this sucks. Cheap, cheap, and lazy. On the other hand, it could have been a lot worse.

You know, i didn't know what to think when i saw there was a poem about the wolfman

YAY! it was really good!

I was worried it would be really cheesy like "now there is no light, i must say good night" You know, poor ryming, but you did it subtlery and suprised us with the ending. It is packed with hits of his condidtion yet you are not outwardly saying it which is a clever feautre. I really like it!

A great job!

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