Yay! AU makes everything better. Update soon.

update

Woah! Should I say it again? Probably not. That would be stupid. But on the other hand... WOAH! It's not just slash. It's slush. But it's not just slush either. It's slush with depth. HELLO. I LOVE YOU. WON'T YOU TELL ME YOUR NAME? Call me what you will, but when a gal can write (really write!) I think it's sexy! And, in my book, you are one hell of a fox. Good for you, foxy lady.

oh lesbian love eh. maybe introduce some more themes into the story. but otherwise really good so far. i wanna read more, so write more.

oh kinky get in there. cool plot and stuff. looking forward to seeing what happens next.

ooh intereseting. luciusjames is a bit weird but i love the whole lily lesbian possibility - one of my many plans. yay.

really really good fic, please keep going!

Write more asap! please!!

OMG! THIS IS BEAUTIFUL! Oh my God!! I LOVE this! You are continuing right? You HAVE to continue! Wow! This is beautiful!! I never really went in for - slush was it? - but this is great! And I've never read a really good f/f one either, but you've changed that. WOW!! And I love the way you describe each girl's POV. Lovely! (James and Lucius! yay!) Anyhoo, keeps it up! I will be watching! XD

update soon! please! really good story so far

Oh. That's sad. It's so pretty, but it's so sad. Oh Lily. So naive. It would have been so cute, but she had to go say that.
But it can't all be sweetness, can it.

(You want to know something scary? When I saw L/N, the first thing I thought was Lily/Neville.)

Hee hee. I skipped from the first paragraph to Chapter 3, and at first I thought it was Lucius. It took me, like, three million years to realize it was Lily. Har har.

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Oooh, you are so cool! Okay,
first, I think it was a good idea to tell people that this is *before* they get together, so that they don't get all confused and wondering how Harry's going to come about...
I love you mention of slush! Power to slush!! Hey, can I come into your little world too? (oooh, is it a warm, naked little world?)
Thanks for the link... I wonder if people will get all confused switching from one to the other? It will probably be a bit of a shock to see how different they are! Oh well, people will deal, right? Right.
And your angst at the end is so... angsty!! Awww, I feel really bad for Narci already, and it's not even to the tragic chapters yet!

Beautiful.

Simply beautiful.

That's all I can think to say... wow. Please write more!

~melts into a sugary mass~ this is so sweet! Your angst is extremely well hidden under all of your fluff! Lily and Narci are amazing... maybe not as amazing as James and Lucius mind... (just kidding, they're all good =)
Oh, and in case you were wondering, I didn't feel like signing in, and my dusty cat name is long ^.^