my god u r amazing...

but as much as the pretty red lava of a volcano blush spreads over Dawn’s breathtakingly beautiful face i must admit the true praise must go to the reviewers cause i cant figure out whats funnier

Buffy is mean to Willow. Buffy yelled at Willow after Willow was hurt because Willow is a magic addicted woman. Magic flows from Willow like a volcano.

or u guys actually trying to help babymimi as if u think she is serouis

Babymimi u r the best u made my day i swear

"Dawn is like the spring of summer singing overhead in a blue fair."

The best line that got me laughing my head off. But it's sweet, it may hurt my brain to fathom it, but it's sweet.

BabyMimi, you taught me a lot of cool things about the moon and volcanoes.

wow you really must hate buffy how come you dont use commas or periods just keep going like its all one big sentence.

Oh Mimi, I don't know what to belive about you anymore, so I'll jsut say this: I *loved* your fic. Just *loved* it. I'm going to read all of your work, even in the fandoms that I have never heared of.

Now, either you are a very clever writer or you are a very awful writer, but either way, I hope you write lots lots more.

Bravo on getting the most reviews I have ever seen for a tiny oneshot about volcanoes. Your avid fans are certainly deserved.

Puzzling.

If this is a sincere effort, then I would have to say that it is appalling. However, the writing style indicates that the author has a grasp of spelling, capitalization and punctuation not normally found in the writings of badfic authors. There are no neologisms or trendy spellings.

All of which would seem to indicate that Mimi is capable of writing truly good fanfic. Yet she spends her time writing deliberately bad fanfic.

Odd, I must say.

I agree with Jem. How any of the reviewers might think that this is a serious fic in need of improving is beyond me.

'Cause it's one of the funniest things I've ever read! :)

"Buffy hits Spike with Buffy's hands"

"Magic flows from Willow like a volcano"

"multiple sheets of brown bark"

"sparkling yellow orb of decadent sunlight"

"two yellow balls of blue fire dancing amidst the flowering tapestry of long sky"

Comedy gold! Comedy platinum, even!

I'm sorry mate, but I godda be 's crap! You need to add more stuff, does everyone do when they find Dawn think Spike's just settiling for her because he can't have things. Don't get me wrong, you got talent, and I think you'll become a great think about what I said. (Or should that be wrote?) Okay?

*Laughing* THAT WAS THE SINGLE FUNNIEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ! OH GOD!

Dawn’s hair is multiple sheets of brown bark overlapping the silky waves of amber green liquid of Dawns eyes under the sparkling yellow orb of decadent sunlight muttering upon the sweet spring ground.

-UHHHHHHH...riiiiiightttt...-

Spike’s eyes look like two yellow balls of blue fire dancing amidst the flowering tapestry of long sky overflowing the mist of Sunnydale with their luminescent gray sheens of silk as they look like volcanos.

-LMAO! I LIKE VOLCANOES!-

"Oh well I guess I have to live with the fact that everyone is in love with me this badly." Dawn guaranteed. So Dawn chooses Spike and they marry.

-LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL...You get the point...-

Keep writing (PLEASE!)

The Vipress

oh, dear god! Promise me you will never stop writing!

This fic is damn funny! I wasn't going to read it but then I read one of your reviews...I beleive it was Jem's. Good.

I saw this with blunt honesty: THAT WAS CRAP!. YOUR STORY SUCKED! Please never write again...and if your proud of this story...well then I pity you greatly. Your possibly the worst writer in the world...and I'm putting that nicely. I would also like to say that I feel sorry for anyone who was forced to read your story all the way through.

Errrr...not exactly a great writing style.

what can i say? ummmmm. . . let's start at that the fic was very, very, VERY funny. really, it is, and if you didn't intend it to be funny, sooooo sorry. another thing worth apologizing over is the fact that the reviews are funnier than the fic itself. especially that 'joan' person. i envy you actually, since you can read these reviews whenever you want to cause it is your account. hmmmmmmmmm . . maybe i should put you under my faves, you know to read your reviews whenever i feel down.

saicho_18 : slytherin -

Some of you reviewers are STUPID! Sorry, but you are. BabyMimi is a joke. She writes DELIBERATE badfic. That means she knows it is bad and she wants it to be. Writing a review that gives her advice on how to improve is dumb. She knows how to write well but she chooses to do it badly, and so many of you fall for it. She is doing it to get a reaction. Please, for the love of God, at least realize that this story and all her others are JOKES and don't take them seriously. You make yourselves look dumb when you do.

I believe in you and you believe in dawn, and Dawn is powerful because she is the key! A key that fits into Sunnydale like a volcano. I like how you handle the intense emotional process Dawn must go through as well as her silk brown long hair that Spike likes because he is in need of hair long silk and volcanoey.