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| Reviews for Lover's Token |
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   AinsleyWright 5/11/13 . chapter 1I really like this. It was so sweet. |
| Scarlett di Angelo 5/3/13 . chapter 1 Aw... Cute! Please make more! |
| Silverstorm489 4/27/13 . chapter 1 Good. Fluffy. Have u read palace of stone? It is the sequel. Miri and other academy girls go to asland for a year and brittas wedding. Peder also goes. It is very good |
| uluvme-realornotreal 11/18/12 . chapter 1 Well, it has the basic story line, which is good. However, it doesn't really fit with what Miri and Peder would actually do. You need to make them more comfortable. It feels almost as if you put modern people in their bodies, talking and acting as if they were from the here and now. Also; there are a lot of grammatical errors, all based on lack of commas. And the storyline you chose should have a lot of emotion, but it doesn't. Overall, pretty good for your first fanfic. Keep writing! |
| Hannah Nace 10/1/12 . chapter 1 Awwww... that was cute! It was clever of you to incorporate a model of the wooden hawk she had lost! Did you know a sequel is coming out? It's called Palace of Stone, knowing Shannon Hale it will be amazing! |
| Spottedmask12 8/15/12 . chapter 1 Awwww! |
| Catrina 4/16/12 . chapter 1 omg! you are soo good! please write more! |
| Dancer Of Midnight 2/4/12 . chapter 1 like it?LOVE IT!you should write more and more |
| InkWoven 3/21/11 . chapter 1 How sweet! Well done :) |
| Lmb111514 2/20/11 . chapter 1 This is great! Pleasekeep writing greatthings like this! |
| Ella Granger 12/15/10 . chapter 1 Awwwwww! That is so sweet! I love it :-) |
| echotheinferno 8/24/10 . chapter 1 they are so frikin cute. but im curious as 2 how miris dad will react when he finds out lol. |
| Bittersweet x 7/24/10 . chapter 1 Awww! This is BRILLIANT! |
| jorbor 7/22/10 . chapter 1 Awwww! So cute! |
