Ahaha oh I loved it. The last bit with horny sasuke was hilarious! As most of you work is :P especially when Naruto tried to snap guys fingers and failed at doing anything bwahaha

Breathes... That. Was. Hot. All of those Sasuke's and and and Naruto and Woah. -blushes-

So is Naruto gonna save Sasuke now? I wonder cuz Orochimaru needs to leave him alone so he can have his heart back and give it to Naruto

Oh my gawd that scene was so creatively hilarious I was laughing so hard! Horny Sasuke... ahaha

Oh sasuke is cool! I love how your stories are so creative, makes them really fun to read :)

Funny, cute; loved it! XD

I really liked this, but it did seem like Howl's Moving Castle pretty much the whole time...Demons, hearts, airships, castles... But that isn't a bad thing at all! Actually, I thought the steampunk theme was very unique.

Awesome story, wish you had included a lemon and a bit more detail at the end but other than that i loved it. Thanks!

Take care.

I have mixed feelings about this. I like the story and the plot. I hate the persona idea. Your a wonderful writer, thank you for the strange, but nice, read.

Hmm... yep as I thought the scene with all the sauskes was disturbing.

That was highly disturbing and please tell me you aren't about to have Naruto molested by a bunch of Sasukes.

Cool idea. Kinda reminded me of a cross betweem Howl's Moving Castle and Beauty and the Beast, but it still had its own original touches so good job!

I liked the ideas of the Sasuke. Wish you had written out a gang bang, lol

Hilarious! This was a great short story :)

I liked how the spells were just the normal word (e.g. excited) backwards (Brilliant! (in my opinion)).

Keep up the great work! Good luck!

i loved this story! it reminds me of that movie about a flying castle. also all the sasukes runing around is like a story i once came up with about naruto and his clones going after sasuke. anywas. I3 this story!

Brilliant! I loved every single second of this and was sad when it ended. I couldn't help but picture Annoyed Sasuke like Shikamaru though...lazy bugger...anyhoe, that was an awesome story and I'm definately adding it to my favourites!

...I love the whole "seven Sasuke's" thing.

Surrriousslyyyy its hot. :D