i am looking forward to where you go with this story, great start

chess thinks he is sooo funny!:) but its working:)

LMAO! yeah hatters 'friend' LOL! YOUR RIGHT I DO LIKE THIS STORY:)

Please write more. I would love to read more. Please?

Continue! continue! UPDATE! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!

so funny! i love chessur's meddling... it's so entertaining.

i had to stop myself from going, "AWWWW..." or giggling, otherwise the people around me would think i was going insane... very good of you to do that. i love that feeling.

update soon! i'd loev to see what chess does to talk to the hatter. maybe a little hat stealing?

This is interesting so far! I hope you'll update it soon. :)

Ohh, interesting. Chess, that meddler!

thanks for the story. it's really good. i think they make a really sweet couple )

ahhh! tarrant.. just... so... clueless! jeez... i had a little spaz attack reading this. great story! i'd LOVE to see it as more than a one shot!

Oh goodness! I didn't even know I needed this. YAY! I would certainly not be opposed to a continuation.

I especially loved the line:

"Hatter was always caught by the fluttering of her hands, wondering if they would someday simply fly off without her."

Something I wonder every time I think about her XD If you want illustrations, you know what to do :D