|Reviews for The Clandestine Affairs|
| BlondeHairBlueEyes14 10/6/10 . chapter 2
LOve It :P And no prob with ur updateing schdule mine's a;; screewed up as weel cuz of school :D
Update soon-ish if u can :D
| ddpjclaf 10/6/10 . chapter 2
You did a good job, chica (Simon...SIMEEK! *snort*). Especially considering the fact that you took the beating of my first round of edits and came back for more! (And more!) I thought for sure you would hate me with the passion of a thousand fiery hells after the first one arrived in your inbox, and that you would somehow convince Smiley that I was no longer worthy of FK's or Shakira dancing. That would have made me seriously sad.
Now, next time I want more schmexy leg wrapping and 'Got you's" because that honestly made me squee a little. I mean, who doesn't want their leg wrapped around Jace (or both...I vote for both-and hands twisted in his hair...and-er, you get the picture)? And the 'Got you'? OMG. That was hot. Though, honestly, he could say something as mundane as "Where is the bathroom" and as long as it was whispered anywhere near the proximity of my ear or just...ME in general, I'd fall over dead right then and there with the hugest smile on my face, and probably a little drool dribbling off my chin. No lie.
Anywho, you know I loved it and had fun torturing you with my insane editing demands. Looking forward to the next round (got your boxing gloves ready? Ding. Ding.) ;) *smooches*
| niniadepapa 10/6/10 . chapter 2
WOW CHICA WOW!
I have thr feeling that this is going to become addictive... I mean, really? The mission looks soo cool! (international huh? They'd better stop at Spain or India! Seriously, can't you just picture Simon in a sari dancing? Mwahaha!), the 'mathematical' plan of Valentine, the V mark... (and is it me or is he choosing the demons by his first name in alphabetical order? xD i'm all freaked now conspiring theories, LOL!). I loved Simon and Clary's scene together - sigh. Why can't I have a geek friend as awesome as him? I love my girls but that'll be just epic... Blah. Anyway, and Eric made an appearence!woohoo! In his rotten banana van! :P and it's new to know that Jocelyn and Luke have no idea about what Clary is...refreshing ;) oh, btw, the ring is super pretty :) LOL
OMG...the fight. Those two. Leg wrapping! hahahaha it was soooooooo cool! I guessed Jace would win - how couldn't he? Gah! - but Clary put up a fight. You shoulb be proud of her (I know I am. She's awesome) siiiiiigh. It was a long one huh? (TWSS!) but now i want more! LOL guess you'll have to please all us addicted readers soon ;) good job Luz! Mwah! And good jon Castle ;) all that re-revising wasn't pointless! :P
| lamarv18 10/5/10 . chapter 2
I liked the fighting going on in this :-). I'm excited to see how this mission is going to go :-)
| XXxGonnaRuleTheWorldOneDayxXX 9/12/10 . chapter 1
Very interesting, the plot holds much potential and with your writing style, it should be fantastic. I'm fidgeting impatiently until the next chapter ;)
| Aprilperson2 8/18/10 . chapter 1
Plz send me ur teaser for the next chapter or tell me were to find I really want to read it ! Thx
| Aprilperson2 8/17/10 . chapter 1
Can you please send me a link to a teaser chapter of this story! Please!
| Aprilperson2 8/14/10 . chapter 1
Hurry up and write another I can't wait any longer!
| BunnyRabbitHopsWhenExcited-Me 8/12/10 . chapter 1
i love you!
| jenn-is-me 8/2/10 . chapter 1
PLEASE TIMES INFINITY UPDATE SOON! I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! what's up with the 'THE Jace Wayland' thingy? Is he like famous or something? Ok, sorry, I'm blabbing! lol well, great work so far with this story, it's really good so far! :D
| Aprilperson2 8/2/10 . chapter 1
Plz hurry up and make another chapter I've been waiting like a month for another one to come out
| Aprilperson2 7/25/10 . chapter 1
Good story I hope you keep on writting more
| MyEvilEmpire 7/25/10 . chapter 1
update soon, please ;D
| niniadepapa 7/23/10 . chapter 1
mmm i liked it!really intrigued to find out what is going on there! Is simon a shadowhunter as well? And does jocelyn know what clary is training for? update soon! ;)
| somethingmadeofawesomeness 7/15/10 . chapter 1
this sounds rly interesting! i wanna know more about itttttt ]