i almost had a heart attack at the start. the thought of mamo cheating on usa is just unacceptable to me.

good thing, i was wrong. i like your fic. though i love usa and mamo's perfect love, i guess it's normal for them to have problems once in a while; and i love how you resolved the problem. and i defintely like how u did the last scene. i admit i don't like to think usa and mamo

doing 'it' but i dont mind if the writer describes it right. i think u did wonderful,

i must say they deserved it.

oh i really like the last paragraph! anyways, good job!

I thought this was a great fic and i hope to see more of your writting soon. If you can give me a shout at

Bye

I usually don't read song fictions, but I am so glad that I read yours. It was very well done. Also, thank you for telling me about my error with chapter 2. I hope to read more of your stuff. And thank you for the encouragement.

May your ideas never end and your computer never break.

great job!

kewlies!

HOPE YOU WRITE MORE SOON. THANKYOU.

That was so sweet! Is there going to be another chapter? J.w. It's perfectly fine as it is and could be left alone, but if you wanted to add to that would be great too! I can't wait for you to write more of The Forgotte One II! Please post more soon! Miko