it's so sad D:

yay yay yay, rg fanfic from you xD

this is good, i love how you describe jaster feeling!

i'll be waiting for the next fic of yours xD

i dunno why, but this is so sweet for me .

i like it xDD

it's a very simple story indeed :)

yup, Denny comes here, buddy! ;D

so, you take the chapter where Raul died huh? nice! but, honestly it's not enough, i guess. it's too short, the plot is too fast, and i have to read this line twice: And hoped He heard my wish for my step-father—Raul.

i thought 'He' is for Raul, but gladly it's not lol.

haha, but, it's ok! just ignore what i've said.

keep writing

finally, you moved to this fandom xD

ok, i cant say 'Welcome to RG Fandom!' cuz im not the resident of this fandom as well :P

well, back to the review!

hmm, i should agreed with drilmi. the story is too short, but still, good story to read haha :)

well, i guess thats all i can write, i hope you'll make another one

it's too short, lee! but, nice one too anyway :)

wait for your next story!