:'( SO sad, so beautifully written, so entirely what would happen if this did occur. You know the characters so well, and you write terrifically. Great job :)

Such a good story! I hope it never happens though! Haha!

That was such an amazing sad story. You really made me cry. I know Jane was the one that dyed but poor Lisbon, she really is taking it bad. She always blames herself. Mother Teresa!

Really great writing, you should write more of these even if they break me heart.

At least then he'll be with his wife and child at last. "Rest in peace." I murmur softly as I leave, "May we meet again."-You really got me here, these lines were heartbreaking. Wonderful story.

SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO SAD! The end is amazing! I really appreciate this story and I truly hope in another one! You wrote very well and the character are amazing!