I love your writing! and this story, haven't seen this movie in a while. Can you ever write a story about when Cloud get punished when he was younger? :D

It is very good that you used a lot of action to write your story!Therefore your story was wonderful and exciting.I like your story very much!

Wow， I didn't expect to see a fanfic for this, much less one so good! Although I haven't watched the film, and what I know came from the TV series I watched pretty long ago, I think you depicted the strong bond between Wind and Cloud pretty well, as well as Wind's feelings of guilt.