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Ionise
2009-07-10 . chapter 2
It's been about... four or five years since I read you first story. Can't really tell how long it's been since I read the presequel to this one and this one as well, however it was a pleasent surprise to know that it's still here.
Needless to say I'm loving every bit of it and hoping that one day, as I stumble into this story once more, you do so as well.
Excellent writing as usual, do carry on the good work.
Hoping to hear from you soon.-
CEYLON
2009-05-28 . chapter 2
please update soon? Pretty please...
Winter Ink
2009-05-16 . chapter 2
AH! loving them together! though eriol adn tomoyo were pretty rough in this part, i still found it addicting to read. i really would love if you decided to pick up on this story soon. soon. o-o its been a couple of years. love teh harsh chemicy they have. wonder how being "friends" will work for them. really hungering for eriol or tomoyo to do some seducing. that's always fun to read. UPDATE PLEASE!!
DemonAngelGirl
2008-11-28 . chapter 2
laziness is a good answer to a lot of things.
pretty good.
take your time but don't take forever.
Ceylon
2008-11-13 . chapter 2
Love it!
Absolutely love it!
Tomoyo and Eriol should really first start out as friends not lovers
Friends with benefits but friends nonetheless but that doesn't mean love is initially or supposedly there.
Love after all grows so I'm really rooting for the day they both come to realize that its not just sex anymore
And even tough you haven't updated for how many years I'm still here waiting for it to be finished
amethysapphire
2006-08-16 . chapter 2
i dont really know how many times i have visited this story(maybe around 50 times) and still no one's updating it yet...i hope you do it very soon...
joviality
2006-07-30 . chapter 2
I'm glad to see a sequel for After The Fall, cos' that's a brilliant story. Hopefully you'll update soon, I'm crossing my fingers, haha. Love Sonomi's reaction by the way =P
iWish
2006-05-27 . chapter 2
4 years=2 chapter! I cant believe it! But if you are going to update this fic SOON, I guess I can forgive you.

This fic is amazing and I lovee it very much. So, PLEASE update it soon.

GANBATE KUDASAI!
White Alchemist Taya
2006-03-15 . chapter 2
nice stuff!!
update soon!
SentimentalcRaZe
2006-03-09 . chapter 2
Ops. Haha.. you'll probably read the review i wrote for "After the Fall", made a mistake there :D. But anyway, I'm so glad you continued the story..and I loved Part2! Hope to read the next chapter soon!:)
Goshikku Seirei
2006-02-23 . chapter 2
man... are you still alive?! pleez update soon! you have no idea how you got me hooked!

i like this, dark and sensual.

i do hope they'd quit the liquor and the MJ aheheheh...

UPDATE SOON!
Motif
2006-02-12 . chapter 2
I love After the fall so much, so I really glad you write more about this story. It feels so real and really follow the story in anime which Tomoyo had the very strong emotion for Sakura, while the relationship of Eriol and Kaho is kind of unexpect for me, it's reliable and possible, and I believe that sometimes love just ain't enough for relationship.

love it and hope you write more and more and more.
asga
2006-01-07 . chapter 2
pretty please can u continue this story ^^ that ok slow also as long the fic is still alive ^^
kristin
2005-12-11 . chapter 2
i've read most of your fics, and have been reading them for a very long time. (about 19) i'm always excited when you post a new chapter, because i know that you have and excellent writing style and a certain depth that most authors here lack.
luckyducky7too
2005-11-24 . chapter 2
I'm slow and lazy too, so I completely understand. I hope you update soon!
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