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Shiroi 3/9/11 . chapter 2
Hi! How are u? I hope u are fine .! Heeey I just finish reading your fanfic "Adam and Eve" and I loved it, it's really great but I noticed is unfinish since 2005, I just hope u could finish it please 'cause... it's soo damn good .!

Thank u very much for taking your time and read my review, see ya and have a nice day .!

Atte Shiroi
cheng 2/25/10 . chapter 2
Hahaha wow. Talk bout agressive!
cheng 2/25/10 . chapter 1
Hahahaha the box. Lawls. XD
Ionise 7/10/09 . chapter 2
It's been about... four or five years since I read you first story. Can't really tell how long it's been since I read the presequel to this one and this one as well, however it was a pleasent surprise to know that it's still here.

Needless to say I'm loving every bit of it and hoping that one day, as I stumble into this story once more, you do so as well.

Excellent writing as usual, do carry on the good work.

Hoping to hear from you soon.-
CEYLON 5/28/09 . chapter 2
please update soon? Pretty please...
Winter Ink 5/16/09 . chapter 2
AH! loving them together! though eriol adn tomoyo were pretty rough in this part, i still found it addicting to read. i really would love if you decided to pick up on this story soon. soon. o-o its been a couple of years. love teh harsh chemicy they have. wonder how being "friends" will work for them. really hungering for eriol or tomoyo to do some seducing. that's always fun to read. UPDATE PLEASE!
DemonAngelGirl 11/28/08 . chapter 2
laziness is a good answer to a lot of things.

pretty good.

take your time but don't take forever.
pansy25 11/13/08 . chapter 2
Love it!

Absolutely love it!

Tomoyo and Eriol should really first start out as friends not lovers

Friends with benefits but friends nonetheless but that doesn't mean love is initially or supposedly there.

Love after all grows so I'm really rooting for the day they both come to realize that its not just sex anymore

And even tough you haven't updated for how many years I'm still here waiting for it to be finished
amethysapphire 8/16/06 . chapter 2
i dont really know how many times i have visited this story(maybe around 50 times) and still no one's updating it yet...i hope you do it very soon...
joviality 7/30/06 . chapter 2
I'm glad to see a sequel for After The Fall, cos' that's a brilliant story. Hopefully you'll update soon, I'm crossing my fingers, haha. Love Sonomi's reaction by the way P
iWish 5/27/06 . chapter 2
4 years2 chapter! I cant believe it! But if you are going to update this fic SOON, I guess I can forgive you.

This fic is amazing and I lovee it very much. So, PLEASE update it soon.

GANBATE KUDASAI!
White Alchemist Taya 3/15/06 . chapter 2
nice stuff!

update soon!
SentimentalcRaZe 3/9/06 . chapter 2
Ops. Haha.. you'll probably read the review i wrote for "After the Fall", made a mistake there :D. But anyway, I'm so glad you continued the story..and I loved Part2! Hope to read the next chapter soon!:)
Jacal Ste. Worme 2/23/06 . chapter 2
man... are you still alive? pleez update soon! you have no idea how you got me hooked!

i like this, dark and sensual.

i do hope they'd quit the liquor and the MJ aheheheh...

UPDATE SOON!
Motif 2/12/06 . chapter 2
I love After the fall so much, so I really glad you write more about this story. It feels so real and really follow the story in anime which Tomoyo had the very strong emotion for Sakura, while the relationship of Eriol and Kaho is kind of unexpect for me, it's reliable and possible, and I believe that sometimes love just ain't enough for relationship.

love it and hope you write more and more and more.
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