Hi there. I've been reading all three chapters and all of them are good. While Ran isn't really my favorite, I dunno, maybe due to her relationship with Souun (I like Kenshin better), this story is well-written, making me feel to read more from you. I love Ran's interaction with Rance in this story.

Apart of that, I think you need to reconsider using Japanese words in this story because sometimes, it'll disturb the way the story flows. But if it's been made in moderation, I don't really mind at all. I'll be waiting for the next update.

PS: Maybe after I finish playing the game, I'll make a fanfic for this game.

Gahahaha nice update

I never thought would see a sengoku rance fanfic good job keep up the good work!

Hey. The name's Shinji, a real fan of the Rance games. I like this story. Focused on the Ran Route which isn't even canon, but still good. I'm expecting more from this story and you. Good luck.