Neat story! Can't wait to read the others, especially the titanic one!

Over all I like your writing style. It is definitely different than Jacques'. Which is good, to much similarity can run the risk of an angry author. I noticed a few typos that make it seemed rushed but that is common with a lot of users. I have read your titanic series. (I don't like to write reviews until the authors finish their series.)

hehehe good story!

wind

Good story.

...You realize that now I have to draw a picture of Ben with a fish on his arm, right?