Lol'd at Allenby being the best woman. 'cos let's face it, no woman in all of Gundam is as awesome as Allenby.

All in all, nice fic.

Personally, though, I think it might've done with a bit more action and considerably more hot blood, but that's just me.

Awwwww *sniff* that is so sweet! I absolutely love the pairing of Domon/Rain! I especially enjoyed the fact that Rain had to remind Domon to put on pants when the Gundam started going out of control. :P LOL! I think you really nailed the characters personalities at the beginning, and though things looked a little abrupt at the end, I really enjoyed this one-shot overall! Three cheers for the romantic awesomeness that is Domon/Rain! Also, I gotta say that I liked your description of the Gundam standing like a sentry over the camp, because I can actually see it doing that! :D I hope that you decide to write more for this fandom!

Very amazing story

Great story but it was to short other then that i loved it