Finally, I've reached the end, and if I may say...WHY ARENT YOU WRITING NOVELS?! This is a well done story and a fun read, and I haven't even started on the sequels yet. Excellent work indeed.

I was going to save my second review for after the last chapter, but let me first say...that girl's dad is a creep! This really shows how well you've come to learn description, something I'm still somewhat grasping. Again, awesome story and moving on to the next chapter.

The perfect ending to this most epic story. It all reminded me of something I might have liked to have written once again, and yet I still don't think I could have managed to write this as well and beautifully as you have. And no doubt the sequel is gonna be twice as brilliant, if not more.

This chapter was quite refreshing and relaxing after so much drama and action. And it also sets up a bit for the sequel really nicely also. The bit at the end with them calling each other a family was so sweet.

Wow! You really nailed down the description of the strength of a pure human heart in the showdown for both Myra and Arthur.

Wow! What an epic chapter this was. I knew Arthur could heal Myra if he just willed the sword to do it. And the action was so awesome from everyone.

I'm glad Arthur found his inner strength to use the sword right when it mattered, and now I anticipate more dramatic action from both of them.

This chapter was a powerful one with powerful imagery all through it. It's helped to put me back in the mood for writing again.

This chapter was rather frightening to read. And I hope this time all will go well in the battle.

is there a sequel, story sounds a little incomplete

miracles can happen, and this is my fav scene in the movie, i shall continue reading the rest of this story

Has Amos really returned now or is this just another of Morgan's tricks? I don't know. But it seems Myra is now sensing danger again.

I can remember feeling as bad as Myra felt once, and I'm so glad Merlin forgave her and cheered her up and now maybe her and Arthur's relationship can grow better than before.

Oh my! I knew Morgan would come at just the worst of times. And I see how Myra has let herself get carried away with her newfound strength and magic. I really hope Arthur makes a good recovery soon, and that Myra also thinks a lot about what happened.

I now see how Myra has changed a lot through her new discoveries. And I can now also understand why Arthur doesn't want her to be his guardian after her talk with Merlin who seems to understand everything, and I also hope he also knows what he is doing too.