This story isn't half bad :)

Soo awsme...pweez continue

more! loving this so far

Brilliant chapter :)

Can't wait to read how Lyra mets her big sister

Please update soon !

Nice job. I guess I'll have to reread the rest and maybe even rewatch the movie, which I'd have to get from Netflix, to remember some of the characters' names, and some of the characters themselves even. By the way, you have a word in there that you are constantly misspelling. You've been saying "Magestrium". Shouldn't it say "Magestarium" or something like that? After all, that IS how it's pronounced. Otherwise, can't wait to read the rest. I must say, the thing that got me so crazy about it all in the first place was the character "Pan" and just the very idea of having a daemon. That would be the best thing ever. In fact, I am quite surprised nobody has written a "(main character's name here)/Pan" love story. For some reason, I just find that pairing to be rather interesting, despite the fact that they can never actually have a relationship like that. Maybe just the closest they can get to it instead? Now THERE'S a story I'd LOVE.

cool chapter!

really want to know what's going to happen next!

:) love this story

Good :)

great story where is lyra and when does lyra meet them

I LOVE this! Please update soon! :)

I read this story a few months back and was dissapointed that it only had one chapter. Im so glad you decided to update. Please write more. This is one of my favorite fics.

Cool chapter :)

Can't wait for next update!

I thought it was good. Update soon please!

OMG. Keep writing this. It is by far the best fic. I have ever read.

It's really really good! Please write more!

i love this story

Its so cool that lyra has a sister

please dont give up on this story

please up date soon