grr it didnt turn out like i wanted either but it was good anyway

It turned out beautifully though. Thank you for writing it

-puppy dog eyes- me want moar now pweaseee

Even if it didn't turn out how you wanted, it was still fantastic! and so perfect.

Excellent story, I'm in the kind of mood tonight where I'm not into reading fluff... this definitely hit the spot. It's deep and it captures the thoughts of the characters well with beautiful descriptions. Wonderful work!

Sweet.

This was really great! I loved how you showed their thoughts and emotions while they wee talking.

Awesome! And very poetic too, I think! Are you gonna continue with this? Cos it's really good! (And it felt like a cliffhanger.) :D