*whistle of amazement* Awesome story! I'm glad there's another year or I could've cried at having such a huge cliffie. Off to the next one!

iwtch wnaker rot this storie it suckes it is to perfect to fast you can right a harry potter story with out a little angst

Great story.. I liked it.. Well done... ;) This story comes with the favorite stories list... Well done... ;)

Fudge is an idiot. you should kill his character

The whole thing with Figg and the Fidelius is pretty much impossible. The Weasleys would never have been able to get Harry out of Privet Drive during his 2nd or 4th years if what you wrote were true about Figg being Harry's secret keeper while he's at Privet Drive.

Now that that's out of the way, I like your writing style, and I'm looking forward to reading the rest of your story...:)

Wow. You need a beta. Terribly.

Other than that, though, with some polishing, I've always liked stories with animagi and superpower-ish harry's in them. Have fun writing!

You need a beta or something...

Because, okay, your plot line is fine, but it's really cheesy. Everything you say is short, and to the point, and that's fine, but not all the time. If everything is short and to the point, you have no story. :|

You need to embellish, be creative, work on word choice, and sentence structure.

This story would be readable if it weren't for the lack of creative language, interesting sentence structure, etc.

love it!

I'm sorry that I have to say this but...

The incantation is Crucio not Cruciartus!
You need a beta... you have words that are wrong everywhere. I get some may be mistypes, but having ANY friend proofread a story will get rid of those.

Mordsemore is not the incantation. It is Morsmorde!

Dude, I get you wrote this awhile ago but you could have checked back with the books, or searched online for the latin spells (trust me there are devoted fans out there that have them posted), or read other stories and seen the way they write.

this chapter is a little dry... i mean, shouldn't harry be more excited or suprised to see his friends? and shouldn't ms. figg be younger or something if she was a friend of harry's mom? and why would she take out her wand, if she's not going to use it? just to show harry? it was kinda random...

No, this is a compliment. I think that it is rather obvious that you don;t read reviews, not mine, but other people are saying that Harry fought Voldie 4 times. I agree with you, he did not fight him when he was a baby. He sat there and for some obscure reason, Voldie died, but Harry did not fight him then per say. Hey, if this bicycle gremlin person thinks that you have exceptional writing skills, I'd like to see his work.

I'd just like to say that I am also blank65. I read your story before and realized when I was looking at your reviews that I had reviwed your "story" previously. I seem to remember hating it, and now I know why. YOU NEED TO GO TO GRAMMAR SCHOOL! YOU NEED TO LEARN HOW TO MAKE YOUR SENTENCES MORE THAN 6-7 WORDS LONG! I mean really, Just then Professor Trelawney came into view. Her voice sounded dreamy. You could have made that much more interesting. Her dreamy voice floated across the room as Professor Trelawney came into view. Also, Everyone in the class was looking at Harry. Harry wanted to disappear right there. Though he had gotten pretty used to it. Harry... Do you see how many Harry's there are? Combine sentances, use pronouns, change the words around. Everyone in the class was looking at Harry who though had gotten pretty used to it, still wanted to disappear right there. OK? Do you understand? I don't expect you to chanfe this right now, but I strongly suggest that you attempt to do this in future fan fics that you right. A little long, and I'm sure that I'm probably a pain in the **, but this is IMPORTANT, if you ever want to make an image for yourself. This is the first thing people see when they read your writing, your grammar and sentance fluency. Oh, and try to use more interesting words?

yes I'm sure I'm being a pain, and yes, I do start every review with yes, but excused me, a quest room? Quest?! WHat the !%#@ is a quest room?! I use !%#@ because I attempt to refrain from using 4 letter words in reviews. Have you gone to school? And if so, what did you get in grammar?

yes I know that you might never read this, but in hopes that you do, a married woman has the title of Mrs. (Notice the r) Not Ms. Ms. means miss, or unmarried. Mrs. Weasley is married to Arthur Weasley. Mrs. Arabella Figg is maried to bob, her late husband. (Yes bob. Not capital B either.)

just wanted to point out that the point when he is getting his letter is a bit forced. they are talking about Harry being inducted and suddenly it jumps to them playing exploding snaps. other than that, it looks good. keep it up