Yay! More Volkner! and I have to admit, I wuff your OCs.

this is such a good story. You have to update ASAP!

*whines* update plz! Such a good story!

This is so good! I loved how you portrayed Giovanni because that's kind of how I think he is too. I can't wait to find out what these pills will do to James. The character development is pretty good so far. I can't wait for the next chapter! This story is going to be outstanding!

I really like the concept thus far. It looks like it is going to be a pretty interesting story. One thing I have to point out however is that there are a few typos and spelling mistakes. As far as grammar went..it wasn't bad but I'm sure if i looked more closely I could probably find some.

I suggest that you invest in a beta. Or perhaps go over your chapter and fix some of the mistakes.

but seriously though...other than that the fic looks great.

Awesome beginning! Please write more. I love how you left it kind of vague. I can tell this story will be good if you continue.

Awesome start!

This fic is pretty cool so far. It has alot of potential! I can't wait to read what happens next!

This fic is pretty cool so far. It has alot of potential! I can't wait to read what happens next!

Seems like a promising story! And I totally understand you OC racism... But in the end, I also succumed to throwing one in in my story. I think it ok to have one as long as their not some immortal son's of bitchies with a zillion powers.

Anyways, is the gym leader dead? I'm not sure, but isn't he Volker? Or something like that? the electric one... I can't remember.

But i'll be looking forwards for the next chapter.

I like! I'd like to see more installments!

Love darker fics. Thats all I'm gonna say. :3