Damn

this was getting really good then u left it at a cliff hanger

im guessing ur not gunna finish the story since u havent updated and a good 4 years almost

i can't get stand the spence more more more

its good, but why does it take so long to find um, i agree with the previous review describing belldandy becoming angered, or enlisting help, pretty good. please finish!

Ooh, Keiichi isn't having the greatest weekend, is he? :'( Poor Keiichi...write more :)

-Clara

Huzzah! Goooooooo Stephen! *grovel*

ask and ye shall recieve, i like this story. K1 has one heck of a bad day though, guess its the price you pay to live/love a goddess.

now FINISH IT..:) i want to know how it ends

_ Please continue!

Interesting premise, the goddesses searching for a lost K1. Your characterizations of Keiichi, Urd and Skuld aren't too bad, and Chihiro is right on. Belldandy, however, is off the mark. When she believes one of her family is physically threatened, Belldandy basically goes on the warpath, changing from kind, gentle homemaker to fierce (though still nice) Norse goddess. In this situation, after she sensed Keiichi was in trouble, she would be grimly determined to find him, and woe betide whatever or whoever got in her way. You seem to have a good knowledge of many aspects of the series, so Belldandy's mis-characterization stands out in this fic. You may want to check out "Terrible Master Urd" if you read the Dark Horse publications. Also, Bell-chan would call upon animals - birds, cats, etc. to aid her in her search (check out "The Queen of Vengeance" in Dark Horse). Overall an interesting premise, though it seems to me that it's taking them an awfully long time to find him.

Just keeps getting better! Please write more! I love your stuff. Oh, and Urd rules.

I'm a sucker for B/K stories. Plus I love when fics use the narrator POV like you did. And so successfully!

Very enjoyable! I look forward to the next chapters! (I still have 2 to go!)

Very good!

I hope you'll continue to update this thing, because I want to see what happens!

Actaully, I can hear you writing more right now!

(over the phone! hee hee!)

I'm looking forward to the 'flirty urd' part! .

Ehehehe...

By the way...

My fav. line so far has to be "I was drunk! What about you?"

*plans on using that later*

I think I'll hassle my other fanfic reading friends to review your story! Yup!

So look forward to more reviews from my kooky friends! _

Ja ne!

Great start, I cant wait to see what happens. Please write more!