I. LOVE. This. Story. You've got to finish this!

Ahaha, Jonathon's a pervert! Well, sort of. And apparently NOT humble lol. Even though I always seem to enjoy Scarecrow and Mels' interactions, I can't wait for her to either meet up Batman or break out. :) I also hope that you update this story.. It's such a shame, it's so addicting and an awesome read, but it hasn't been updated for so long..

WOW. Finally! Even though I said she better not get caught by Scarecrow, I've been anticipating when she would meet him! I almost had goosebumps from reading that scene where Scarecrow corners her, but then I burst out laughing when she kicked him in the crotch. Pretty sure I haven't read that ever happening to Jonathon, lol.

Ugh.. creepy! Although, that's why I like the Batman series, and this story, because even though she's kind of going off on her own adventure, things are still realistic and intense. Haha, fangirling over the Riddler tape, I can actually picture that real well, 'cause I would probably do the same!

Okay, scratch what I said in the last review. She better hope that Scarecrow AND Croc don't get their hands on her... I don't know who's worse, actually. Lol, at least she was smart enough to book it out of there when Zsasz looked away for that moment!

fsjfbdjfnk. Oh god. Melanie better hope that Crane NEVER finds her.. He likes her screams, and now he knows she's actually not a ghost.. Phew!

Ooooh. This is sooo good. I try to find crossover stories all the time, but I rarely actually DO find them.. Only the first chapter and Melanie is getting in over her head! It's still funny though, how they think she's a ghost. XD And the Joker... "I've been hearing rumors of a "ghost" running around Arkham! I want her found and I don't know… exorcised or something." LOL.

Ok so i read one of the best fanfiction of batman,that includes a fantastic,funny,and realistic OC and to make things better Jonathan Crane is the pairing,and a lot of fantastic villians make their appearance,and not to mention the fantastic and interesting plot of the story. Just that it is stoped in one of the better PARTS"!. For goodness my dear writter you are killing the readers that are brave enought to read a story that had not been continue since this long!
I know people hav things to do,or lost inspiration,but seriusly you should consider finishing this story,because it is FANTASTIIIIIC! So i begged you that if you have interest in finish it pleaaase compete it
And if not its amazing that at lest you show us this amazing chapters and the good
writter you are

Amazing! Won't you please update?

even though I can't Vote on the Voting thing that says who she should be with I like to say she should be with Killer Croc, any way keep up the awesome job

More please!

She should end up with Croc.(If you ever bothered to update:l) Scarecrow has been so done and tired really. :P It'd be a unique review grabbing factor.(though with the amount you have already for less than 10 chapters you haven't updated... T-T) Sorry if something's come up...

Love the idea for this - great work :)

Ya know, I'm pretty upset your not updating this.

more please author this is intense i love it