u should make a story out of this! i would totally read it!

I abosolutly L-O-V-E your story. Its so cute and full of fluff :P

The story was awesome but if you cut out all the cussing I think it would be even better!

This was AMAZING, you my friend have a gift OWN IT ;p

Both of the chapters were really well written. I really liked the story. Good Job!

Love e pov

Great chapter

oh my... i love this story! i've always thought that jacob was a stubborn jerk in the books, not knowing to take a no for an answer... you have perfectly portraited his personality... i also loveeeee the fact that edward beat the crap out of him... a dream come true

just for that, you have became one of my favourite autors

Aww this is uch a sweet story! I love it! :D

They are so darn adorable!

very good

they were both good.

thanks for writing (:

so sweet.

No, you shouldn't do an EPOV. That would be just horrible, because then it wouldn't be a full story! Lol... Can you PLEASE make this into a full story? It doesn't even have to be right now, but just start sometime within the next 6 months maybe? You can do the first chapter from each of their POV's to get a handle on who they are and a glimpse into their lives and how they compare and contraszt to each other maybe. And then the second chapter can be part one of the one-shot? And from there just continue with everything that has happened to them in those two years in between. Then it can all lead into the last chapter with part two of the one-shot but expand it slightly... And THEN maybe even a sequel? lol... It could be them in their first year or so with their kid(s?). Haha... This is all just EXTREMELY wishful thinking and hoping. But I for one, think it would be a great idea! So, can you PLEASE get back to me with your thoughts on this?

Yes! An EPOV please, if you have time :)

Anyway, I really like the way you added up their marriage life in the end.