your doing very well! i love this game so so much!

i'm so happy to see someone writing the actual story of this game it is my fave out of all the atelier games! keep up the good work!

You seem to be following the game well. Ive played Azoth of Destiny and thought it was great gameplaywise and storylinewise.

What more can I say? This is a good novelization so far.

sa-weetness! very descriptive... super awsome to read