I loved it! I'm obsessed with WfE at the moment, and I'm trying to read slowly because I don't want it to end, but I can't because it's just so good and I want to keep going. And that's where fanfics come in.

I've been on this site since I was fifteen, and about seven years later everything I write still sucks - in my opinion. But this was really great, you've done an excellent job, I'm looking forward to more.

Well, I came here, specifically looking for something for 'Water for Elephants' because I'm going through an obsession faze with it currently, and I must say it was a hard search. You're the only person on that has posted a story to do with it... and because, currently, WfE doesn't have a massive fanbase, I think it's very brave of you to be the first one to put this story out there. So congratulations... and I thought that this was great by the way... short but sweet! :) x

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Love it Continue please!

this is interesting. it shows that you have read the book, and you know a bit of what you are talking about. i am far from a teen, haven't been for quite some time, but just because you ARE a teen, don't let that stop you from trying to hone your craft. I would be happy to continue to read anything you wish to share with us. keep it up kid, i have faith in you.

Bittersweet. Somehow kinda made my heart twinge for the sadness

Really loved it! You seem to really understand Jacob's character when he's older, even though you are a teenager. I'm a teenager too and I think my stories suck aswell. I think that no one's ever completely pleased with their work, so, keep trying. Post more chapter for this story!

I know what you mean when you say that a teen's writing is imperfect. I'm 13 and personally I think that all my stories suck. I'm trying to improve it but sometimes it's hard. This is really great! I have recently read the book and I can't wait for the movie to come out. I hope it won't be rated R. That would suck. Anyway continue soon. I love it so far.