Poor Keith! Amy is a very interesting character. I get the impression that she thought Keith was different from all the other guys, and really liked him, until he said those three little words. Three fateful words that cost him dearly. Of course, knowing Keith, he may only have thought that it was true love. He will probably forget. Of course there is the possibility that his feelings were deeper than they usually are. Either way, I guess we'll never know, unless there is a sequel... Anyhow, cool story! )

Okay...wait a minute. This one says that it's complete? No way! I was looking forward to reading this new story, and it's a one shot? Man! I mean, I can't believe that Keith is going to give up on her that easy. I think you could have taken this a bit further, it's well written; I really like your writing style. Please reconsider and write a few more chapters on this one. You had a great start on it.

Karen