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Haunt of twilight 8/2/10 . chapter 1
that was cute father son bonding. I agree with the smoking thing, but the way I see it, you can harp all you want, but in the end it's up to the smoker to choose to quit or not. I do it to my oldest sister all the time. I never picked up the habit
orange sodap0p 7/21/10 . chapter 1
When I browse for stories on this site, a lot of times I go back as furthest as I can, because I tend to find the best stories buried under so many other fics that often times they hardly get read anymore. And here I my backwards searching was well worth it.

I really like that the POV was Matt's dad, and I liked the little tidbits of Mr. Ishida reading his son's emotions from the body language of how he ate his dinner. I also like how you compare Matt to his mother..a lot of times I see TK being compared to his mom since he lives with his mom, but it's a very interesting take to hear Matt went with his dad because of the resemblance to his mother.

Despite no being home very often (or so it seems), Mr. Ishida seems to be close with his son, or at least close enough that Matt was able to talk to him about something I think most people may have trouble with. I like that you gave them that bond, and I really like how the subject was handled. The divorce may make Mr. Ishida seem like not the best person, but really, after reading this, it's obvious he wants the best for his family.

Very well done )
Windfighter 5/9/08 . chapter 1
aww, I like how Yama gave his father a hug w But I didn't like how his father stared at him 'cause he look like Nancy... or... whatever the mother's name is xD I've always called her Nancy anyway '

Yamato: *rolls eyes*

I just wonder if his father hugged back because it was Yama or if it actually was because he wanted to feel like he was holding Nancy again...

Yamato: I hope it's the first alternative ._o

me too ._.

Kouji: It probably was xD

You never now with Gregory xD

Yamato: Why do you really call him that? xD

I don't know xD I think it fits xD Well, anyway, I liked this story :D

Yamato: It was interesting how dad could know what was on my mind :-O But I don't like the fact that I was smoking _ Windy would never let me near a cigarett xD

Nope, why would I? 0) It's bad for your health.

Kouji: Though the main reason is that she hates the smell xD

hysch, you weren't supposed to tell them that! :-O

Yamato: xD ANYWAY!

*turns to Yama, then towards author* Yeah, we liked this! And we're holding our thumbs for Yamato and Taichi! :D

Kouji: Which means we wish them luck and hope they gets together xD

Yamato: Don't you say like 'fingers crossed'? o_O

But that's lieing! :-O

Kouji: In Sweden anyway xD

Oh well xD Five thumbs up for this story! :D And one thumb down because Yama smoked ;

Yamato: Okay, now it's enough xD *turns camera off and everyone's screen goes yellow*
mirai3k 4/25/08 . chapter 1
So, so, so moving. Wow. I mean, wow. I love Matt's family. I know it's strange. But reading about the divorce, the consequences, and all the background and the ripples it created just make Yamato all the more real to me. So really, truly, you did a wonderful job with this.
Curtis Zidane Ziraa 8/14/06 . chapter 1
This fic's flippin' ancient. But damn if it's not one of the best ones I've read. So awesome. :D
born a dreamer 8/10/06 . chapter 1
I love it. It's one of the best fics I've ever read, and it's interesting that you chose to do it from Mr Ishida's point of view.

LOVE it!

Promise I'll stay away from cigarettes. Mom's been smoking for like 32 years and has finally stopped, so she'd kill me if I ever started _
butterflie 12/10/04 . chapter 1
*dances* it's on ffnet, it's on ffnet! Back in 2001, I used to read this fic so obsessively that I had almost the entire thing memorized and would go around reading it in my head when I didn't have it on paper.. I love this thing to pieces
jrw 3/20/04 . chapter 1
Sweet! That was cool the way you tied everything up and it made sense! Interesting perspective.
VioletteMai 2/29/04 . chapter 1
i love the comparison that you created. love, smoking and chocolate. Mr Ishida's personailty fit perfectly with what he said. and how yamato and mr ishida intereacted, i could picture it.
hope you continue to write,
cuz i can tell you, you have the talent. dont ever doubt yourself.
Xia 3/21/03 . chapter 1
You're a brilliant fucking writer. interesting perspective, nicely done.
devilburns 3/12/03 . chapter 1
this story is so good.

good advise on the fags though, chocolate is much betta
jkb 12/26/02 . chapter 1
I love this story!

I read it some time ago, and was so glad to find it again!

Great job!

jkb
Nanaki Lioness 9/29/02 . chapter 1
This gets better every time I read it _
Redrum 8/30/02 . chapter 1
I'm glad his dad was so understanding. Well written.
canadian weirdo 2/27/02 . chapter 1
absolutly touching *sniff*
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