|Reviews for Red Dawn on the 4th of July|
| beastlynerd 9/16/12 . chapter 1
holy shit bad ass story
| Siro 7/22/10 . chapter 1
A good story but with several little errors that distract from an otherwise enjoyable experience. Here are my tips to you.
1. Capitalization. The names of people, months, cities, rivers, and other things need to be properly capitalized. You know what needs to be capitalized.
2. Quotations. Every time a person starts speaking, his or her quote gets its own paragraph.
3. The Republic of China and the People's Republic of China are two separate countries.
4. Spellcheck. Your spelling errors are not too bad but enough to be distracting.
Hope this helps.