This was a good fanfiction I liked it very much, it was very good and the writing is awsome to read. It wasn't boring or bland had it's funny parts and I really enjoyed it. Write more like this ...:3

Excellent



From Mark (PLYMOUTH, GREAT BRITAIN)

Seems like a good guess

I liked that story. It kinda reminds me of me. Some parts I don't quite understand, but I get the over all idea and it's a cute story.

I used to have a Eevee sticker I stuck to a skateboard and took to school sometimes. Her name was Evan. Yes, HER name. I'm not saying it's a girls name or anything, because I named it back when I knew it was a boys' name, I just thought it was the right name for her, even if she is a girl... I'm getting off topic.

Interesting, but I feel the Ash bashing was just a distraction from the main body.

Great story. The bit with Peaches and Cream was especially funny and I really, really liked the the character interactions between Eddie and Evan. Question. If you owned an Eevee, would you really call it Eddie? Or was that just for the purposes of the story?

wow, I like this. will you do more?