I absolutely love this story so far...will u ever continue it?

nice story, please update soon!

Oh my god love it! love it! LOVE IT! please please please update it!

Its good so far. Please continue!

I actually laughed out loud through out this story so far you real talent and I am genuinely excited to see where this goes I really hope you update it soon and I cant wait till you update it :)

Pffttttt jajahhahhHahhahhahahh oh gods that was hilarious! More!

This chapter was good. It made me laugh, and I can't wait to see what's coming next. Merry Christmas and update soon!

Interesting so far. I am curious to see where you take this. Update soon!

Just fyi, some people (myself included) may find it slightly annoying when the first chapter of a fanfiction is just an author's note. If part of the story directly followed in the chapter, it would be more interesting. Not meant to sound offensive, I'm just letting you know.

Mormeril

Bwhahaha! Awesome! This story is soo awesome(if only the movie took this approach), can't wait to see how the rest goes.

Good job! I know you are busy right now, but start thinking what you are going to do throughout the story so you can do some foreshadowing throughout the writing now. I would really like to see the summer described in detail! Good luck on your recital!

Hehehe the summers will be interesting, that's for sure. Please update soon!

Hmmm. I suggest you describe more into detail and also use more descriptive words. Bwahahaha? How about 'his haunting laugh echoed through his layer'. That's not the best example, but you get my drift. You have an interesting idea! Keep going!

Wait, so if derek is captures this time around, what's rothbart going to do to get the kingdom? Please update soon!

ohhhhh this is really interesting. so what is rothbart going to do, since derek is a boy. Please update soon!