Evil Ron has to be one of my favourite OOCs. You made the story so realistic and it fits in with the DH plot line. Fantastic story.

Midnight Mahogany

What an interesting premise! I look forward to seeing where this will go. I was always kind of skeptical of Ron's random moments of brilliance in Deathly Hallows... they seemed contrived to me. I like your version better!

This is so good! Don't give up on it! Please update! I can imagine Ron being easily influenced by a horcrux and the fact that all the elements comply greatly with the book is really good! I find your ideas incredible and I hope to read more of this story!

Oh, is this just a one-shot? I was really hoping for more! You had me shivering with excitement!

why is the story marked as complete? It feels like it should be a multi-chapter fic. It's really an interesting plot idea. I hope you do continue it.

I liked this but I felt it was more a beginning than an end... Is there more to come?

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE ADD MORE TO THIS! This is such a brilliant plot and I really really want to see the Tom/Hermione interactions! :)

Very interesting. I'm curious to see where this goes. Update soon!

I liked it but how was it Tom and Hermione?

Hubris.

oh i love the idea. this would've been really amazing if was longer but it is still a great read.

oh noes! write more!

Oooh, oh, oh YES!

This is fantastic. I always was a bit skeptical about Ron just making some strangled hissing noises and oops! There goes the Chamber! I like your explanation far more, ahhaha. Also, the way you had him reacting to Riddle's taunting? Fantastic. I'm glad you write Ron as Ron, not as some detestable jerk, like so many of other fandoms are inclined to. XD

Can't wait until this one gets bumped up to the update list! :DD I await it eagerly.

Ooh! This looks so good - manipulative!Tom is so hot, and this is such a great, promising idea. You make it make sense, too - Ron getting through the Chamber of Secrets, his thoughts about Hermione fueling his acceptance of Tom, etc. I like how you don't villainize or victimize Ron too much; I know there's a clear bias among HG/TR authors to do some serious Ron-bashing (myself included xD), but here his insecurities come across naturally, as does his stubbornness and concerns in his conversations with Tom. Good job on that, too. Plus, I love the idea of a post-canon story like this - LV is dead, but part of his soul lives within Ron, how creepy is that? xD I do hope Tom will find a way out eventually, because even if he takes over Ron's mind...being stuck looking like Ron...*shudders* xD

Don't make us wait too long for updates on this! )

Kako (too lazy to log in, haha xD)

very interesting. i really do think you should make this a story. i see so much happening! i love how Ron is willing to be all evil just to get Hermione. D! good story! Update again soon! THANKS!