Hi!

I'm a new reader- I started reading "What Happens In Oklahoma" a week ago and was hooked. I moved on to the second one, and now this- they are AWESOME! I'll definitely be going to look for your book, too- I've been into Arthurian legends since I was little. ;-)

Can't wait to see more of this story! The plot twists are quite fun- I laughed my head off when Nick found Sarah and Rex in Thomas and Martha's wedding photo. I hope you put more up soon!

KatiaSwift (Katia)

My names verity! :) but im afraid I'm not like your character I'm sorta emoish...;)

I only have one thing to say about the Oklahoma series, and that is "Why is the rum gone?" As in where is the rest!

Its so sad I have to wait like everyone else for such a good AU to continue. Warhawk and Reaper will make a cute couple, though I wonder at what point do the wings stop showing up.

Now to pilfer through the rest of your stories on FF.

LockDown over and out...

Ho! It's good to see this particular story still lives! I've always greatly enjoyed your work, and this series in particular has always held a special place in my heart. I'm glad I finally get to review it. As I've come to expect from you, the writing is uniformly excellent. However, I'd like to bring up some criticisms of the story in general. My first criticism concerns Superman's daughter (I can't recall what her name is). At this point in the story, she seems largely unnecessary and one dimensional. She's just too much of a bitch. There doesn't seem to be anything else to her, Nick's endorsements aside. And, well ... I honestly think she needs a bit more depth. While I understand that she is supposed to be disliked, I also think she and her feud with Sarah should be a little less flat. Does that make sense? I'm not sure whether my next criticism is a valid one, but I figure it won't hurt to mention it. Sarah's devotion to Gotham and the "mission" seems a bit quixotic, if you ask me. I mean, her behavior is what I'd expect of Bruce. Granted, she is his daughter and all and then there was that whole thing where she was kidnapped, but I still don't think that compares to the trauma that made Bruce so intensely focused on the mission. It just seems odd to me that she would unnecessarily try to cut off Rex for the sake of the mission. Sorry if this is a bit rambly or incoherent. I've a bit of a headache at the moment.

-P4L

I already love where this is going, also you wrote Alfred brilliantly in parts one and two!

Glad to see you're back and writing :) love this chapter. Would like to see more Diana in this story but that is just because she is my fav :) Hope you update soon

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What is going to happen when Martha opens the pouch on the utility belt? What will she find in the pouch?

Will Bruce put together what happened and figure out how Sarah and Nick went into his past?

THANK YOU! I love it, and hopefully won't have to wait a year for the next one. (Hint, hint.)

I AM VERY GLAD FOR WE HAVE YOU BACK MY LADY!WHEN I SAW YOUR UPDATE I WAS BEGIN TO REREAD THE STORY...AS YOU CAN FORECAST MY FAVOURITE CHARACTER IS SARAH SINCE THE STORY CHAPTER THE NEW ONE AND I WILL NOT BE SUPRISED IF THE GRANDPARENTS OF SARA PUT THE REX AND SARAH CLOSER TO A ROMANTICAL RELATIONSHIP...UPDATE SOON PLEASE OH MY GODDESS OF FANFICTION! HAVE A NICE DAY!

AHH! I've been anticipating this update for ages! I reread the story just so I could fully appreciate this chapter, which was excellent by the way. I', glad you threw in a bit more of Rex and Tom. And the bit at the beginning with the wedding photo, to be honest I can't say I was surprised, but it was still a great snip it to throw in. I cannot wait for more!

I haven't read the chapter yet but seeing that this updated in my email just made my day. Yay!

Oooh! An update! Me likey! Heh, looks like Nicky and Bruce know something's up with Sarah and Rex. You know, since they've appeared in a photograph taken back in the sixties! *giggles* So awesome. ;)

OMG! YOUR BOOK SOUNDS SO AMAZING! This sounds like something that is totally up my alley! I definitely hope it crosses the pond and ends up over here at some point so I can get my hands on it! :D

I love your Sarah character but in this chappie she really was being an immature selfish bitch. Whether or not she likes whoever her brother is dating it's still none of her business and how she reacted was totally out of line and I feel it was her who should've apologized.

Please please please update!

please update this! It desperately requires one. It feels like you were finally getting to the main plot of the fic, then it just cut off. I'm going crazy here! (In the good, need-to-know way.)