That was nice.

How come you don't write Fire Emblem Fanfiction anymore? You've got such a talent for it.

I very much enjoy this. In general, i enjoy all of Amelia's pairings, especially when she's stronger, not the weak little child she used to be.

I found a few places where the wording wasn't quiet right, and I feel like the list of things Franz learned is a bit extraneous. cliff hangers are a good thing when used properly.

Overall, good. I like the characterization of Franz, that seems pretty close, just because he does seem like someone that is more of a worry-wart than Forde (probably in retaliation :P) but not as overbearing and rule-focused as Kyle, so good job there.

Alpha

Yay, another Pureauthor fic! :D In terms of thematic similarities to "No Longer Alone," yeah, I do think it's pretty similar-I thought this was an adjunct or sidestory or something to "No Longer Alone" when I read it, hehe ; That's not necessarily a bad thing, its so well written, after all! Keep up da good work :D