wow this is fantastic i cant wait to see what happens next please update soon!

Please don't give up on this story! It seems really hard to find any quality fanfic for the gates and this one looks like it really has promise... I'm dying to see more of Kara and see where you take her and Lukas. Please update soon :)

I like it!"Lukas is my fav character and I'd like to read a Gates story well wrtien

Yay! Another great Gates fic! I simply adore Lukas and Kara seems like an interesting character too! I also adore the fact that you have great grammar/spelling - it gets tiring, slogging through bad mistakes, and I'm happy to announce that I can't find any in your chapter. Update soon!

You're off to a very interesting start, I really like it so far. Kara seems like an interesting character, her little introduction with Lukas made me laugh. :)

I really like what you have so far, and look forward to reading more when you update! Hopefully you get a chance to do so soon.

wow lukas nice